Meta-commentary on Original Paper

Ideas on things to change/improve upon

  • This essay was really my first time exploring with disciplines and I know A LOT more about what they are now. I am thinking of talking about my switch from Med Bio to the Humanities and what those two disciplines looked like. I’m also thinking of taking it a bit further and talking about the different disciplines within the Humanities. I’m hoping Cripps will offer more advice on this.
  • This essay lacks a thesis and focuses entirely too much on summarizing.
  • I use WAY too many block quotes and I use them incorrectly.
  • My ideas change throughout the essay, so even if I had a thesis I wouldn’t be sticking to it.
  • My transitions and signal phrases do not match with my ideas.